tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2127043563552284485.post824634598406005438..comments2023-03-21T18:41:43.865-04:00Comments on SmArts Journalism: The Submission Review (Revised)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07538024355021402244noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2127043563552284485.post-3720756708629225492013-03-20T13:05:02.621-04:002013-03-20T13:05:02.621-04:00I like how you connected the process of building t...I like how you connected the process of building the memorial to American democracy. That gives it another political element beyond the clear 9/11 aspects on the surface.<br /><br />I also agree that the epilogue was unsatisfying. I think she should have just ended it and left things ambiguous.Maggie Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02120956965909234356noreply@blogger.com